carmamazum's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stacks+]

I don't have much to say.
Good game to help you improve your timing.
Good work!

[2D Bird Simulator]

It's like a combination between Flappy Bird and... Pong, I guess?

Even with the instructions, it's pretty difficult to know what you have to do in this game.
I feel that the bird peaks at the corners are a bit unnecessary and annoying.

I like the concept, but the lack of music disturbs me a little.
Meh, not a bad game. I was entertained for a while.

[Don't drop the star!]

The game has a very big problem, and that is that the stars do not come out randomly; they have a pattern that becomes immediatly recognizable (I get to 100 stars without much trouble) and this makes the game easy and boring.

It also needs music and better visuals.
That's all from me. I hope this helps you to improve.

[Time For Math!]

Thanks for helping me improve my math.
The bad thing is that I'm stupid and I can't go beyond 10.
Also, the description made me laugh.

Very good game.

KingCringe responds:

I'm glad was able to help you and many others, stay tuned for "Time for Math too".

[Invader Overload]

Very entertaining, I really liked it a lot!
I always liked Space Invaders, and you gave it a very interesting turn.

The gameplay responds very well and is really addictive.
I loved the 3D effect you did and the music is just phenomenal!

There's a glitch in the menu screen; if you select the game mode (manual or automatic) with the cursor, it behaves in a strange manner. The truth this is not something that affects the gameplay or the game itself, so, meh.

You really did a good job! :D
(Sorry for my bad English)

morningtoast responds:

Thanks for the report on the title menu, that's a bug I discovered later and I know exactly how to fix it, just haven't gotten around to it yet. I released this game last year and just put it up here on NG so it's great to get some current feedback. Thanks for playing!

[Chicken Z!]

You like chickens a lot, huh? Nah, just kidding.

I can see that you really improved from your last game, my friend.
The menu screen is functional and the game has no glitches, or at least I have not found any.

But the game still has a couple of problems:

1. The shooting action does not work very well; how to say it? It stays very stuck and sometimes does not shoot.

2. There should be a High-Score system, otherwise the game does not make sense and does not encourage the player to continue playing.

Also, you forgot to put instructions on how to play! XD

In truth, you are on the right path. You really struggled to improve and here's the proof.
And that's why I give you 3.5 stars.

Keep practicing, I know you will achieve it! :D
Sorry for my bad English.

ChickenBurry responds:

Thanks! I will be making sure the shooting action will be fixed. I will be adding a high-score system, too. And instructions! Again, thank you.

Edit: I updated. Also, there was a glitch, if you hold down space bar your character glitches. But i fixed it! And, of course, AGAIN, thank you. And i updated. -11/22/2017

Edit 2, 9/8/2018: Its ben a while. Pretty much all bugs fixed, much better, and finished. You probably wont read this but i do hope you play it again.

[Story of a Cube]

Oh... you little troll.
I laughed a lot through this game!

Definitely an unforgettable experience.
I look forward to the second part :)

[Talos Descent]

It's pretty easy, at least for someone with my skills, HAHAHA!... Nah, I'm just kidding.
Speaking seriously, it IS quite easy, but that does not take away from it being a very entertaining and fun game.

At first I noticed that the gameplay was a bit slippery, and I thought: "Oh god, this is going to be awful..." But believe it or not, the gameplay responds very well and is functional.

Great job with this game!
Sorry for my bad English.

mhughson responds:

What is your hi-score? I am curious just how easy it is.

[Witch N' Wiz]

A pretty entertaining puzzle game!

The graphics are absolutely adorable, and the music is pretty cute.
The puzzles are challenging, but nothing that can not be solved with some insight and patience!... Although I don't have the first of those two :(

I liked the theme of going back in time (what a powerful witch, right?).
Really good work with this game! :D

Sorry for the bad English.

mhughson responds:

Thanks for playing! Glad you enjoyed it, and your English is flawless. :)