carmamazum's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pikuniku Battle]

A very funny and very addicting game. No doubt I had a good time! :D

I tried to find errors in the gameplay, but I did not find any. I loved the art and the music.

One flaw, however, is that the arrows you use to personalize your character are not very visible; it seems that they are part of the background. It took me a while to find them.

But in general, it's very good! :)
Sorry for the bad English.

Memolestas responds:

Thank you so much for taking the time to test the gameplay in depth. I will take in account your suggestion about the arrows for the next iteration of the game :)

[Bustin']

A very funny arcade style game!... Definitely better than that trash that came out for the NES. Ugh... *shivering*

The controls respond very well and it is quite addictive.
I personally did not find any flaws in this game.

Really good work!
Sorry for my bad English.

morningtoast responds:

The sprites I used are actually from the NES but they are from a Ghostbusters game that never got released in the US, only in Japan.

[Optimal Route]

A very simple game, yet very challenging. But obviously this is not a bad thing, because a game that challenges your mind is always good!

It's a shame that I'm too stupid for this type of games; I could not get past stage 3 of level 1.

Very good work with this game!

Sorry for my bad English.

blairox responds:

Hi carmamazum, thanks for your feedback.
The game can be quite challenging, it's how it was meant to be. I personnally did not solve all the combinations the first time: I tried, solved a few ones, got stuck, did something else for a while and came back again to solve more :).

[Eagle Ride]

The eagle goes too fast and the trees are too close to each other, making it too difficult to avoid them. If the eagle was a little slower or the trees were much more separated, the game would be much better.

Even so, good try.

aronsommer responds:

Thanks for your feedback! I have adjusted the speed its now a bit slower.

['DUCKS!']

I really liked it! It has one or two failures; for example, sometimes the enemies are bugged with the corner of the stage blocks (it happened to me twice), also the hit detection of the orange duck is very... Big? I don't know how to describe it.

But in general it's a really good and entertainig game. The music and the graphics are absolutely adorable! The perspective and the gameplay are also very comfortable. The puzzles become challenging, but they are very fun to solve.

Excellent game to have a good time. Really good job!
(Sorry for the bad English)

[JOE 1]

Typical test and error type game.

There is a part that becomes quite difficult, if not impossible, to pass (right after the hallucinogenic mushrooms); if you not die, you stay bugged between the two metal platforms. I don't know if this is on purpose or not, but if so, the game is quite short; I leave with the desire of laugh more.

I like the art and the music, they fit good to the game. Besides, the gameplay is quite comfortable.
I insist, it's a real shame that the game is so short.

Sorry for the bad english.

danielamaral84 responds:

the green mushroom makes you faster

[My First FPS game]

I don't know if this game was for trolling or if you really tried to make a game; I'm going to sitck with the second option, so listen:

1. It's literally impossible to hit the balls.

2. It's normal for the character to move withouth me doing anything?

3. I think it gave you laziness to put a background and music, right?

You should practice a little more and test the game with some friends. That's all.

[Pinball]

I'm really sorry, but I have to be honest.

The game stays very stuck and moves really slow, I tried to play on another browser and the same thing happens.

The levers move very, very slow; and that doesn't allow a good boost for the ball.

Also, from what I see once it's Game Over there is no option to start again, or I do not know if that is a bug; which by the way, it has many of them.

What I would reccomend to you is to practice a little more and not forget to test the game until you and several friends of yours feel it well. Oh, and don't forget to add some instructions.

I hope this review helps you to improve. Sorry for the bad English.

[Short and Sweet]

Disturbingly interesting, I really laughed a lot!

...I think I have mental problems :(

The art is very bizarre but excellent, I don't know why but it reminded me a little of Lenore the cute little dead girl. Also I love the creepy music box tune and the rhymes you wrote.

The only bad thing is the glitch of the hand (thanks for explaining how to try to avoid it in the description), I think that with a little more practice you will improve your coding skills.

Really good work! Sorry for the bad English.

[Order Up]

The children are too fast and also come out in such random ways that it's very difficult to avoid them.
It's normal that all the orders came out at the same time, or is just a bug?

Also, you would have put some music or at least sound effects.

That's all. Sorry for the bad english.